:.:Magnet:.: Thomarie

Magnets are really fun to do, huh? I've seen people Cosplaying them even, so I know they are popular.
I will begin with some basic things that I noticed instantly. The entire nose to chin area looks off. Lips curve outwards, not in on themselves. It also would've been nice to see some teeth, a tongue, etc. rather than just a blank mouth. The noses do not seem to fit in with the rest of the face, but they do still look good.
A few other things that are bugging me are the arms. From the shoulder to the elbow they look fantastic, but after that the quality isn't as solid. Especially with the fingers. When drawing weak points of yours, try using YOURSELF as a reference! It helps a lot and can really make a difference. Also work to make sure pieces of the body go well together! Thomas' left arm is split into two pieces that don't work together.
The last thing I hope to see improvement on is the coloring. I can see the beginnings of a good coloring technique coming along, but patience and care need to happen before it improves. When you use colored pencils, make sure all the strokes are even and blend in together. Be more aware of pressure. As for the hair coloring, I would DEFINITELY work with the blending and shading of it.
Also, the characters didn't really seem that recognizable to me. I first saw this and thought 'Magnet', then I read the description and realized it was Thomarie. That might call for more work on characterization. Practice making characters recognizable by more than their clothes and hair!

However, the actual drawing overall looks nice. I especially love the anatomy on Marie, as well as the smaller details.
With some work and practice, this would be a great piece to look back on in a year and maybe even redo.